i think that your piece was very well done structurally and compositionally. i especially liked the abstractions that you were able to create. i dont have anything to say about your audio either, i think that it was well placed throughout the video and gave it a sort of crescendo there at the end.
Elisha, great job! Your structure seems consistent and flows well. I didn't notice any awkward frames. Overall I love the vivid colors in this video. I think it adds a certain style. Also, a really cool shot was of something that looked like a jar or something translucent. It had a nice affect. The bustling noises in the background of clanging and conversation gave me the impression that the video abstraction depicted a busy place. The only recommendation I have is that i would have liked to see more of your shots move instead of having so many still images.
Its very structured in that the shots seem consistent, making a flowing rhythm. I really like the continuous color through out the piece. Works well because of the flow you set and the color choice making it abstract. The only thing I thought might help is the great mixture of sounds in the middle and for audio, I like how you ended it tapering down from the loud clanging and voices in conversation to light ambient sounds, I would have a little more sound in the beginning. Good Job!
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i think that your piece was very well done structurally and compositionally. i especially liked the abstractions that you were able to create. i dont have anything to say about your audio either, i think that it was well placed throughout the video and gave it a sort of crescendo there at the end.
Elisha, great job! Your structure seems consistent and flows well. I didn't notice any awkward frames. Overall I love the vivid colors in this video. I think it adds a certain style. Also, a really cool shot was of something that looked like a jar or something translucent. It had a nice affect. The bustling noises in the background of clanging and conversation gave me the impression that the video abstraction depicted a busy place. The only recommendation I have is that i would have liked to see more of your shots move instead of having so many still images.
Its very structured in that the shots seem consistent, making a flowing rhythm. I really like the continuous color through out the piece. Works well because of the flow you set and the color choice making it abstract. The only thing I thought might help is the great mixture of sounds in the middle and for audio, I like how you ended it tapering down from the loud clanging and voices in conversation to light ambient sounds, I would have a little more sound in the beginning. Good Job!
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