i really liked the choppy aspect that your piece had, both visually and through the audio, however i think that to add to it you could push the volume higher in certain areas in order to create a more strenuous mood.
The guitar is consistent throughout the entire piece and really is the glue that holds everything together in a coherent manner. The video has a sense of chaotic elegance to it. What I mean is that pristine moods are disturbed by chaotic secondary background sounds and camera movements. The lighting is also a key factor that adds to this pristine feeling of calmness. The composed pieces act well together as a whole despite them having any noticeable objective relation to one another. -Sheldon
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good use of varied focal lengths. Shots were abstract and left me guessing the entire time. Over all a good job.
i really liked the choppy aspect that your piece had, both visually and through the audio, however i think that to add to it you could push the volume higher in certain areas in order to create a more strenuous mood.
i love the first 10 seconds, but when your start looping the footage it loses momentum .. the audio it s well incorporated.
The guitar is consistent throughout the entire piece and really is the glue that holds everything together in a coherent manner. The video has a sense of chaotic elegance to it. What I mean is that pristine moods are disturbed by chaotic secondary background sounds and camera movements. The lighting is also a key factor that adds to this pristine feeling of calmness. The composed pieces act well together as a whole despite them having any noticeable objective relation to one another. -Sheldon
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