You're composition was very interesting. the concept behind it was very well thought out and planned and worked well. The sequence did seem to be a little repetitive but i enjoyed the way it ended. I dont know if you considered sound and i'm not sure if i have much more to say about it, but i think it worked well without any sound.
[structure] This was probably the strongest part of your piece, overall (esp. the beginning and end). I enjoyed your concept, but I would have liked to seen some variation in durations of clips; maybe to suggest food digesting or something.
[comp.] Nice zoom ins and zoom outs, but I think that there needs to be some more variation in framing. And more macro shots would really help; things you shot were still recognizable.
[sound] Definitely needs some more sound elements, especially with the concept you used. Lots of possibilities with that; eating, chewing, etc.
Interesting concept that gives a constant structure to your composition. Would be nice to have the audio of the mouth ahhhhhh!, or mixing up the jelly, shaking nuts.
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Sheldon,
You're composition was very interesting. the concept behind it was very well thought out and planned and worked well. The sequence did seem to be a little repetitive but i enjoyed the way it ended. I dont know if you considered sound and i'm not sure if i have much more to say about it, but i think it worked well without any sound.
overall, you did AWESOME!
Your neighbor,
Lauren
Sheldon-
[structure] This was probably the strongest part of your piece, overall (esp. the beginning and end). I enjoyed your concept, but I would have liked to seen some variation in durations of clips; maybe to suggest food digesting or something.
[comp.] Nice zoom ins and zoom outs, but I think that there needs to be some more variation in framing. And more macro shots would really help; things you shot were still recognizable.
[sound] Definitely needs some more sound elements, especially with the concept you used. Lots of possibilities with that; eating, chewing, etc.
Interesting concept that gives a constant structure to your composition. Would be nice to have the audio of the mouth ahhhhhh!, or mixing up the jelly, shaking nuts.
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