The structure was well put together, and it flowed together with the sound very well. I think that the audio in the rough draft was a little stronger because I liked the bubble gum portion, and that was lost in the final.
This is a very interesting abstraction... the sound works good, the compositions are good, but there is one shot with the rainbow that requires more movement since all the other shots have it, because it does not look as part of the piece. Well done.
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The structure was well put together, and it flowed together with the sound very well. I think that the audio in the rough draft was a little stronger because I liked the bubble gum portion, and that was lost in the final.
This is a very interesting abstraction... the sound works good, the compositions are good, but there is one shot with the rainbow that requires more movement since all the other shots have it, because it does not look as part of the piece.
Well done.
Interesting subjects. Sound works well. I don't know how the different subjects are related (or if they are supposed to be).
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