a lot of the compositions make it so the viewer isn't aware that these are clips of still images. however i would abstract the more obvious ones. the music seems to fit the overall mood of the video, but maybe at the end it should fade out.
The whole piece is consistent with regards to tonal values. I was under the impression that the whole piece was on different engravings and etchings into a material. But The revealing of the face at the end proves the viewer wrong. That was a worthwhile edit.
3 comments:
structure
cuts are tighter than original. more abstract which is good. the sound of the guitar in all the shots makes it more cohearent.
composition
tight shots make it more abstract and camera moves less which helps that too.
sound
guitar through all the work is better
a lot of the compositions make it so the viewer isn't aware that these are clips of still images. however i would abstract the more obvious ones. the music seems to fit the overall mood of the video, but maybe at the end it should fade out.
The whole piece is consistent with regards to tonal values. I was under the impression that the whole piece was on different engravings and etchings into a material. But The revealing of the face at the end proves the viewer wrong. That was a worthwhile edit.
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