nice compositions throughout the whole thing. the shots look like they belong with each other. i like the opening and the closing because it's not just chopped. it kind of works that you didn't put sound on it but maybe some kind of abstracted sound that goes with the roundness of the shots would have been nice together.
The movement in this really adds to the piece and the slowing of the movement works well. The different shots seem to be well thought out. No sound though.
I really like the change in focus throughout. I think that some shots could have been longer than other ie. the shot of some weird part of the bike that looked like an animal of some sort hanging upside down. Or maybe added more of that type of shot. The fact that there was no audio was nice because it made you focus on the movement and the change in focus even more. Maybe it you had left the sound and played it really low it would make the viewer strain to hear making them more engaged in your piece.
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nice compositions throughout the whole thing. the shots look like they belong with each other.
i like the opening and the closing because it's not just chopped.
it kind of works that you didn't put sound on it but maybe some kind of abstracted sound that goes with the roundness of the shots would have been nice together.
The movement in this really adds to the piece and the slowing of the movement works well. The different shots seem to be well thought out. No sound though.
Crap... I hate this and I hate you Adam.
I really like the change in focus throughout. I think that some shots could have been longer than other ie. the shot of some weird part of the bike that looked like an animal of some sort hanging upside down. Or maybe added more of that type of shot. The fact that there was no audio was nice because it made you focus on the movement and the change in focus even more. Maybe it you had left the sound and played it really low it would make the viewer strain to hear making them more engaged in your piece.
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