i loved the composition! it was very colorful and interesting. I liked the shot where the candy came in and out of focus and i even enjoyed the ones that never came into focus. I think it made it more interesting. I think the sound in this short was good... i think if you did too much background noise it would just seem random and unplanned, but you might have been able to use the slightest bit more.
[structure] I think your piece flowed pretty nicely with all the pastel colors together in the candies...a good looping video!
[Comp.] Definitely strongest element...you had some nice close-ups and macros; and again, the colors (pastel) kept the piece unified. I really liked that you used one subject and "studied" it from diff. angles. Awesome!
[sound] Like Heather mentioned, just more playing around with clips of those conversations, and consider more sound.
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Dear Meag,
i loved the composition! it was very colorful and interesting. I liked the shot where the candy came in and out of focus and i even enjoyed the ones that never came into focus. I think it made it more interesting. I think the sound in this short was good... i think if you did too much background noise it would just seem random and unplanned, but you might have been able to use the slightest bit more.
overall... AWESOME JOB!
-Lauren
Meagan-
[structure] I think your piece flowed pretty nicely with all the pastel colors together in the candies...a good looping video!
[Comp.] Definitely strongest element...you had some nice close-ups and macros; and again, the colors (pastel) kept the piece unified. I really liked that you used one subject and "studied" it from diff. angles. Awesome!
[sound] Like Heather mentioned, just more playing around with clips of those conversations, and consider more sound.
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