I enjoyed the abstract movements, but sometimes it almost was too much. It would have been nice to see a little variation in there and see some stills or something along that nature. I'm not exactly sure what you're concept was, but the editing in this "film" was interesting. Not sure if you thought about sound, but it might have been too much to hear too much sound to match all the constant movement.
Judging by the content of your video I would say that it was dealing with texture more than anything else. I think this piece could have benefited from the use of more sound, possibly something quite the opposite of what you would think touching these objects would sound like. Overall the piece was composed well with a wide range of shots and subjects with consideration to light sources.
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all of your shots are fast moving, i would slow down to really abstract the objects. the composition could be more creative. i love the silence.
I enjoyed the abstract movements, but sometimes it almost was too much. It would have been nice to see a little variation in there and see some stills or something along that nature. I'm not exactly sure what you're concept was, but the editing in this "film" was interesting. Not sure if you thought about sound, but it might have been too much to hear too much sound to match all the constant movement.
Judging by the content of your video I would say that it was dealing with texture more than anything else. I think this piece could have benefited from the use of more sound, possibly something quite the opposite of what you would think touching these objects would sound like. Overall the piece was composed well with a wide range of shots and subjects with consideration to light sources.
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